IELTS Writing - Sample Letter 1

You heard that a park near your house would be closed. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should:

- tell how you heard about the news.
- complain about some possible effect of closing the park.
- suggest some alternatives

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the announcement that the park near my house would be closed. I am one of the residents living on Tran Phu Street. I have known the news on the local broadcast and I would like to receive your explanation.

In my way of thinking, this park is a good place for children as well as adults to get fresh air. If you close this park, where will the children in this area go for entertainment? Moreover, should the old people do morning exercises, they can’t find out any better places than this park.

I wonder whether a new supermarket will be built here. It can annoy the residents living here because of noise, pollution or even crimes.

I am impressed with your explanation that you are eager to improve our standards of living. However, my desire is to maintain this peaceful park as the best suggestion you would like to help both children and adults widen their mental lives.

I hope that you will take appropriate measures to be calm our worries.

I am looking forward to your response as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Peter

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IELTS Writing - Sample Essay 1

Some people believe that children can be better educated by being taught at home rather than by attending lessons at school. To what extent do you agree with this idea?

Education is now generally regarded as a basic human right. In most countries, children from 5-11 receive compulsory primary school education, and in others, they also receive secondary education during their adolescence. However, there are some children who are entitled to go to school but whose parents prefer to homeschool them. In some countries this is a growing trend. In this essay I will explore the reasons for this development and the advantages of both approaches.

First of all, in mainstream education, pupils not only gain knowledge in a range of academic subjects, but they also learn valuable social skills such as cooperation and team work, which can be used in their adult life. Secondly, staff have acquired qualifications which means they can use effective teaching methods. They can also set benchmarks; in other words, they know exactly what children at different ages should be able to achieve.

Home schooling, on the other hand, can allow a child to receive individual attention, develop at their own pace and also concentrate more as they will not have to deal with disruptive fellow studets. Another point in favour of home schooling is that more lessons may involve e-learning and the use of interactive media.

Continuous innovation in education is providing students with many learning options. If an option helps students to be motivated, it should not be ruled out.

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